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| | Oh Noz, Starry's Battling XP | |
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starryday Moderator
Posts : 266 Reputation : 35 Join date : 2009-07-20 Age : 30 Location : East Coast, US Favorite Pokemon : Camerupt
| Subject: Oh Noz, Starry's Battling XP Wed Jul 22, 2009 6:30 pm | |
| Okays. This is a doubles battle tower team. I've never actually made a team before, so try to criticize constructively. Not planning on using this against real people, but I still want it to be as good as it can be. I made this a few weeks ago, and now that I'm looking at it I'm kinda questioning the EV spread on Starmie. But anyway, critique and help are much needed. Oh, and I'm willing to replace anyone on the team except Swellow - Starry MUST have a swellow on her team. I can work with the moveset and all, but me wants a swellow. STARMIE @ Damp Rock Ability: Natural Cure Nature: Timid 136HP / 156SpA / 216Spd ~ Rain Dance ~ Surf ~ Thunder ~ Recover GENGAR @ Life Orb Ability: Levitate Nature: Timid 4Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spd ~ Shadow Ball ~ Thunder ~ Focus Blast ~ Explosion SWAMPERT @ Leftovers Ability: Torrent Nature: Impish 252HP / 96Atk / 160Def ~ Earthquake ~ Ice Beam ~ Toxic ~ Surf SWELLOW @ Toxic Orb Ability: Guts Nature: Jolly 252Atk / 4SpD / 252Spd ~ Brave Bird ~ Facade ~ Protect ~ U-turn
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| | | Tr4q Your Getting There
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| Subject: Re: Oh Noz, Starry's Battling XP Thu Jul 23, 2009 3:56 pm | |
| Swellow@Flame Orb/Toxic Orb Jolly 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe Facade Brave Bird Protect U-turn The better set. | |
| | | starryday Moderator
Posts : 266 Reputation : 35 Join date : 2009-07-20 Age : 30 Location : East Coast, US Favorite Pokemon : Camerupt
| Subject: Re: Oh Noz, Starry's Battling XP Thu Jul 23, 2009 4:21 pm | |
| Thanks! | |
| | | Jude Common Poster
Posts : 187 Reputation : 18 Join date : 2009-07-09 Location : New Jersey Favorite Pokemon : Mew
| Subject: Re: Oh Noz, Starry's Battling XP Sat Jul 25, 2009 4:07 pm | |
| Several things, make sure you add descriptions to your RMT to make sure it's easy to follow and pictures would be nice too.
Tr4q posted an improvement that I assume you liked. If you did and you want it on your team you should edit it onto your RMT so other plays can see what set you are now using.
Thirdly, you didn't post a full RMT. That's not a huge problem but you didn't exactly ask us to help you fill in the space or give us guidelines we must follow for those missing Pokemon.
Gengar doesn't have the bulk to get a Rain Dance off. You're better off running Explosion and move those 4 ev's into Attack. This doesn't exactly OHKO Blissey but does quite a fair bit of damage.
If I can, I'd like to suggest some things for your final spots. You might want a Blissey killer which can be the bane of Rain Dance teams. For the last spot you might want a Swift Swimmer to fully benefit from the rain. | |
| | | Tr4q Your Getting There
Posts : 89 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2009-07-21
| Subject: Re: Oh Noz, Starry's Battling XP Sun Jul 26, 2009 12:03 am | |
| Examples of swiftswimmers: Kingra, kabutops, and ludicolo. | |
| | | starryday Moderator
Posts : 266 Reputation : 35 Join date : 2009-07-20 Age : 30 Location : East Coast, US Favorite Pokemon : Camerupt
| Subject: Re: Oh Noz, Starry's Battling XP Sun Jul 26, 2009 4:05 am | |
| - Quote :
- Several things, make sure you add descriptions to your RMT to make sure it's easy to follow and pictures would be nice too.
Tr4q posted an improvement that I assume you liked. If you did and you want it on your team you should edit it onto your RMT so other plays can see what set you are now using.
Thirdly, you didn't post a full RMT. That's not a huge problem but you didn't exactly ask us to help you fill in the space or give us guidelines we must follow for those missing Pokemon.
Gengar doesn't have the bulk to get a Rain Dance off. You're better off running Explosion and move those 4 ev's into Attack. This doesn't exactly OHKO Blissey but does quite a fair bit of damage.
If I can, I'd like to suggest some things for your final spots. You might want a Blissey killer which can be the bane of Rain Dance teams. For the last spot you might want a Swift Swimmer to fully benefit from the rain. I'll try to add descriptions, and will change the Swellow. Notice that this is a Battle Tower doubles team, hence there are only four spots. And thanks for the tips. | |
| | | Paco Forum Noob
Posts : 61 Reputation : 1 Join date : 2009-07-05 Age : 28 Location : Somewhere Favorite Pokemon : Gyarados
| Subject: Re: Oh Noz, Starry's Battling XP Mon Jul 27, 2009 10:14 pm | |
| thats a pretty good team to me. since it's the battle tower and doubles i dont know much about it but it seems good | |
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